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Friday, February 24, 2017

The Sky ⚽


The sky can be bright blue
The moon is white
People think the stars are nice
Some think they are fake
Some think wrong


Make a wish before its gone...





6 comments:

  1. hi my name is carmel and I go to Waima school I love your poem its so cool I like the way that it is nicely done keep up the great work and go to my blog to see my work that I have done

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  2. Bula vinaka Hayley Milan here.
    I really like this poem this is really good I thought that you copied it from google (that means it is really good) I thought this was really good, while I was reading this I was looking at the sky and it is true. You must of thought of it a lot, maybe you could've added some more things and maybe something about the poem. I think this is amazing and I would always think of the poem. Blog you later bye.

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  3. Bongiorno Hayley Emily here.
    I love how you have made this poem it really makes sense.
    Maybe next time make it a bit longer so it can last longer.
    I really love it though.

    blog ya later

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  4. hey hayley Roxy here,
    I love how you have it really cool Maybe next time you should put more slides in to it but apart from that it looks really good that's all for now byeee

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  5. Hi Hayley safiyya here amazing work good work could you make you poem longer??

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    1. hi it is me hayley sorry we are only allowed to make a short one.

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