Once Upon A time, there was a beautiful princess.
Her name was Princess Leia and she was living in a Magical Castle with her royal family and her friends from the little village near the castle
One day in the Kingdom, a person came to offer fruit to everyone in that Kingdom, but there was a poisoned berry in the basket that he was holding. It got there by, as he was riding to the Magical Castle a poisoned berry fell off a tree and landed in the basket.
When he went to the Magical Castle Princess Leia took the poisoned berry and ate it,
A few days later she became very sick and her family was very worried about her.
As she grew she became thinner and more sick .
Two weeks later the person came back with some more fruit and princess Leia ate another berry and...
SHE WAS HEALED!!!!!!!!!! Theydon't know why but it happened.
And she lived with her family and with John in Custody and they lived happily ever after.
Wow Hayley this is such an interesting story! Great work! I wonder how that magic berry made her all better? That was a great plot twist! I was also thinking that it would be great if you made a cool title for your story!
ReplyDeleteHi Hayley I like your story and next don't so people can read it.
ReplyDeleteHey Hayley it's Aryan just checking out your blog.
ReplyDeleteThis story was really funny.
Some full stops were missing.
Anyways blog ya later!
Hey Hayley TJ here it was funny but you have to put some full stop but it was really good and. I wish if can do some more keep it up
ReplyDeletehave a good day at school bye TJ out.
Good job hayleyand good job with your fallstopes.
ReplyDeleteHey Hayley
ReplyDeleteIts Haylee here from Grey Main School and I am in Totara 3
I really like you story about princesses it was really funny.
Maybe next time you should include more full stops.
Haylee