Wow Hayley, the sentence you have picked out "the blackened earth and blaze tore through" what a great sentence, you have some great vocabulary! I am glad you are starting to use it! Is there a way to make the slide transition faster... I don't like waiting to read what next, you made me too excited to be patient!
Hello Hayley, This is a really awesome story. I went to the port hills as well when it had been put out, it was just really sad going past. Awesome job.
Wow Hayley, the sentence you have picked out "the blackened earth and blaze tore through" what a great sentence, you have some great vocabulary! I am glad you are starting to use it! Is there a way to make the slide transition faster... I don't like waiting to read what next, you made me too excited to be patient!
ReplyDeleteHello Hayley, This is a really awesome story. I went to the port hills as well when it had been put out, it was just really sad going past. Awesome job.
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