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Friday, June 30, 2017

The Zoo Badness


Hi blogger in the last 2 weeks we have been writing a journey narrative I
chose skyla keisha emalea and me hayley please make sure to comment on my work.



the zoo badness


“Come on let's go to the zoo Hayley said on the phone. I will meet you at the gates. Ok.  Oh hi Skyla. Hi Hayley. Have you got the picnic? Yes I have. I have my phone for pics. Ok. let’s go and see the monkeys. You go and see the monkeys and I will go and get some food for the griffes. I won't be long. Bye. Meet you at the monkeys.”


“Hi I went as fast as my legs could carry me. Lets now go see the monkeys... 10  mins later...
“What is that.” “I don't know let's go see what that is.” owww!!!!!! That hurt… HELP!!!!!!! I NEED HELP. we have to help Hayley ok let’s in where she is.woooooooooooo!Ok I don't feel so good.”


“I am so sad how we going to get home? I don't exactly know Hayley sorry. What is that? I don't know. Let's go see. Where are we going now? I hope we get home.  I'm hungry.  I have Magic said skyla. Emalea  got chocolate and ice cream Skyla got nachos Hayley got cookies and Keisha go a hamburger.I'm not hungry anymore that's good we are now on  Mount Everest!!!!!!!!!!!!!”


“Look what is that I don't know oh look it’s that nice fairy that helped us when we got stuck in a sinking boat!!!! I cannot believe my eyes Hello Tinkerbell I see you have got lost said Tinkerbell. Lost we are not lost thank you. Are you sure about that. I'm pretty sure. Can you send us home just a little bit of pixie dust. Abracadabra Abracazi make these humans go back to where they be. My tummy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Oh my goodness we are home and keisha’s house!!!!!!!!! Let's go get some pizza!!! Yes I will get my phone Come on. I'm tired let's go have a little nap Snore snore snore snore snore snore 2 weeks later Happy Birthday Skyla here's a present. Oh my goodness little kitten’s. Thank you so much This is my best birthday ever thanks for reading my story I hope you had a good time see you later.” The end.

2 comments:

  1. Hi there hayley I really liked your slide about your narrative you wrote another reason why I liked your slide was because you used msp characters and that made it look like you animated it keep all the good work up Hayley and I will blog to you in the future bye

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  2. Kia ora Hayley.My name is Shialla from T3 at Grey Main School.
    This is really well done and it would of taken you a really long time to do this.Maybe next time you could make it a more exciting but other that that it was awesome.We might try and do this for our reading next week.
    Kai pai

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